Wednesday 19 December 2018

This is my first first summer learning journey post

1 comment:

  1. Talofa Fatimah,

    Cia here form the Summer Learning Journey Ako Hiko team.

    I appreciate that you have taken a bit of time to present your work. Remember that although the activity is asking that you use the information on the linked website, you must make sure you paraphrase any information (put it in to your own words).

    Please rethink and edit your post to include three chosen facts that have been paraphrased carefully by you.

    For future posts, please make sure that all your posts are written in your own words in order to make sure you receive full points for activities.

    Keep working hard Fatimah, I look forward to reading your edited post :)

    Toe feiloa’i fo’i (see you again),

    Cia.

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