You have written a nice description of what the woman in the picture can see based on her surroundings. She does seem like she's on the roof of a very tall building somewhere beautifully sunny. Where in the world do you suppose she is?
Perhaps next time you could write about what the woman would be feeling in that moment when she snaps the photo she is posing for... I feel like she'd hop down to safety and breathe a deep sigh of relief because she didn't fall!
If you were visiting a beautiful place and wanted to take a memorable selfie, would you take a risky one like the woman in the picture? Personally, I wouldn't!
Kia Orana Fatima,
ReplyDeleteYou have written a nice description of what the woman in the picture can see based on her surroundings. She does seem like she's on the roof of a very tall building somewhere beautifully sunny. Where in the world do you suppose she is?
Perhaps next time you could write about what the woman would be feeling in that moment when she snaps the photo she is posing for... I feel like she'd hop down to safety and breathe a deep sigh of relief because she didn't fall!
If you were visiting a beautiful place and wanted to take a memorable selfie, would you take a risky one like the woman in the picture? Personally, I wouldn't!
Toe feiloa'i fo'i,
Cia.