Greetings, I am Licha from Room 8. I like your piece of writing :) Maybe you could try adding more punctuation to make it more exciting. Please visit my blog - http://odsnitlichac.blogspot.com/ Blog ya later :)
Hello Fatima, it's Luke from Rm 23. I like your story it is very interesting. I think it is a great story to make. How long did it take you to make the story? Blog ya latter. https://odslukea.blogspot.com/
Hello Fatima, It's Phillip from Room 25. I really liked your creative writing. I remember doing lots of creative writing on my creative writing slide. maybe you could try putting your writing on one slide so it is easyer to read?.
Thanks for sharing your learning! Blog ya later! Phillip.
Greetings, I am Licha from Room 8. I like your piece of writing :) Maybe you could try adding more punctuation to make it more exciting. Please visit my blog - http://odsnitlichac.blogspot.com/ Blog ya later :)
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ReplyDeleteThank you I will try too add more punctuation next time and make it more interesting.
ReplyDeleteHello Fatima, it's Luke from Rm 23. I like your story it is very interesting. I think it is a great story to make. How long did it take you to make the story?
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Hello Fatima, It's Phillip from Room 25. I really liked your creative writing. I remember doing lots of creative writing on my creative writing slide. maybe you could try putting your writing on one slide so it is easyer to read?.
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing your learning!
Blog ya later!
Phillip.